April 07, 2010

The Dream Comes False

"The Dream Comes False" is the name of my newest story.Here it is:-

Johnny was an intelligent boy, great in studies and many other activities but was a ZERO in swimming. He was very shy so he couldn't tell the swimming teacher to teach him swimming. His friends laughed at him. Then he told his parents about it. They called a swimming teacher named Numero to teach Johnny swimming. Numero said that he could teach Johnny swimming in only one month. Johnny was very happy, he felt like his dream came true. Then after three months Johnny was booked for a swimming race by Numero. Numero told Johnny that he has to win this race. Johnny was confident. He and all the other participants came to the swimming pool arena.1------------2---------------3 *SHOOT* and every participant jumped into the pool. Johnny was at his best. When he had nearly reached the end, he looked back to see where were the other participants. He saw a participant Masekro who made a joke of him at school. Then he remembered those days when everybody laughed at him. His body became straight in the pool as if he was standing, he moved his legs and hands to survive. He tried to move forward but instead of that he was going down. Everybody in
the audience thought that he is going to float and will come back up in seconds but he didn't.

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7 comments:

Rohin Mittal said...

Heyyy.... Nice story.. i wish its not the end and u'll put up the continued part in your next part.. :)

Anshul said...

Good story Vinayak...short but up to the mark.. Like Rohan I also wish that it is not the end.

Zanil Hyder said...

This seems to be a good start and halted at a tragedy to revisit the site again.

Rushi said...

rhis is do good but some mistake is there but overall good
and you should also write the moral of the story

vedicanbest said...

yes do dreams do comes false....

eventhough i would have loved johny winning the race....but thats the way it goes...

every story does not have a fairy tale ending....

nice work man...kudos!!!!

Suyash said...

good story:)

jazzpoetry said...

This is haunting.