April 08, 2008

Viniman and Vini Bond: 2.The mission

This is the 2nd chapter of Vini Man and Vini Bond 2.So enjoy the chapter.
2. The Mission
When the story ends Vane went to his house and when he reached to his house Vini Man and Vini Bond's ghost started to tease him. Then Vane's boss get one mission, then the another detective came there and said '' I had came to take the mission"
"Hey you SHUT UP stupid, I will not give you this mission"Boss replied and he kicked him and said “Get out from here" and he went to his house. Then there came two underworld thieves named Vicky and Tapor and they went to rob the bank and when they reached to the bank they said "HANDS UP" and they rob the bank and went to their house. And at Vane's house Vini Man and Vini Bond's ghosts are teasing him and then there was boss's call on Vane's mobile and he ran fast to get his mobile and asked"Hi boss why have you called me and what is the matter?" "Hey Vane we have got one mission. You have to catch two thieves named Vicky and Tapor" Boss replied "O.K. Boss” Vane replied.

8 comments:

unpretentious_diva said...

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Dragon said...

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saif said...

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Sriram said...

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Sameer said...

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manorath said...

u are gettin better.. and the story is gettin interestin