August 25, 2008

Vini Man and Vini Bond 3:Chapter 6

Hi guys and girls.Get ready because I am giving you the 6th chapter.
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6.Who's key is this?

"Hey Vit who's key is this?" asked Grot
"I don't know" replied Vit
"I think we should go to the detective"said Chain
"What? You are saying that we will go to detective" shocked Jack
"Chain is right.We should go to the detective and give him the key then after 2-3 days the detective will get to know who's key is this" said Jackie
"Now we should go" said Arker and they went to Vane's house.
"Are you a detective?" asked Chain
"Yes,what you all want"replied Vane and he doesn't knew the faces of Six Criminals.
"Hi,we got this key from road want to know whose key is this.Can you tell me that who's key is this?" asked Chain
"O.K let's go to my boss" replied Vane
"May I come in?" asked Vane
"Yes,but who are they"asked Osborn
"They are six men and they got a key from the road and thy want to know who's key is that"said Vane
"Say them to come in" said Osborn
Then Vane said the Six Criminals in and when Osborn saw them he got shocked.
"Vane these are Six Criminals take them to the police station"whispered Osborn to Vane
"O.K."replied Vane
"Come with me"said Vane to Six Criminals
Then Vane went to police station with Six Criminals and he stopped the Six Criminals outside the police station.Then Vane said to a constable in the police station that open one jail they have to put Six Criminals inside.Then that constable opens a jail and Vane called Six Criminals inside and said"Hands Up!!! You are under arrest"
Then Vane was taking Chain in the jail when he reached near to the jail he jumped back rotating himself and pushed Vane in the jail and ran from police station with his five partners but the key fell down in the police station.

30 comments:

Mihir said...

Too cool haan!
at age nine im not sure i could even spell properly! ;)
keep writing !!!

Mith said...

oooohhh...this is getting interesting!!! when you comin up with next chapter?

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

good post kiddoo...

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

good post kiddoo...

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

good post kiddoo...

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Sharad said...

nice blog vinayak

uchiha tejesh said...

gud1 buddy ,
very descriptive blog

keep writing

teju

mohdbrzn said...

What about next chapter very interesting buddy.....
Go on keep posting........

Mith said...

already commented

mohdbrzn said...

Thnx.......

alex paul k said...

nice...good going

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

nice story...!!!

u can write the script for an action movie when u grow up...

;)

Anshul said...

u r good at writing dear... keep it up... hope to see ur book some day...

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

do proceed..the patronsof ur blog are waiitng for the story to proceed...

:)

Nishi said...

nice blog you got here man :)

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ANNAMALAI said...

Great work man!

Dan* said...

already commented on all your post so commenting again ....

i cant wait to comment on a new post :)

Shantharam Shenoy K said...

hey great one...am waiting for the next one...do hurry up..k...

Shantharam Shenoy K said...

hey...nice one...u really are a good writer...waiting for the next part...

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Deepz said...

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good write up..

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Dan* said...

good !

KP said...

its ok...

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

commented but commenting again...
u can put the dialogues in proer punctauation marks...

and write them separately so that its easier for ythe reader to track the dialouges...

Dan* said...

njoyed reading it so read it again :)