August 13, 2008

Vini Man and Vini Bond 3:Chapter 5

I hope you liked my story till chapter 4.Now it is the turn of chapter 5.
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5.Betrayal with Six Criminals


Now the robbing day came and Vit went to Mr Orn's house as a gardener and said
"I am a new gardener"
"So what?" asked Orn
"Tell me where is the garden?" said Vit
"O.K come with me I will tell you" replied Orn and showed the garden to Vit
When Vit enters the garden he asked"Now tell me what to do?"
"What?You are gardener and you don't know what to do?"replied Orn
"NO!!! I know but this your garden so what you will say I will do that"replied Vane
"O.K I will tell you"said Orn
When they were busy in gardening Chain and Grot came and when they came in the house and they opened one cupboard but the glass on it got broken.Orn heard the voice of glass and he went in the room but before Orn come in the room Chain and Grot ran away from the second door.Orn saw that no one was there so he come back to the garden but he saw that Vit was not there.Vit was in the room and he opened that door of the cupboard to take the box.He took the box and heard the voice of shoes and he knew that Mr Orn is coming so he took the box and ran from the room but his purse was still in the room and that is why he once again came in the room and Orn went out to find Vit. Then Vit took his purse and went out from the room and Orn came in to get Vit but Vit took the box and went out of the house and he called a taxi and sat in the taxi and got to his gang's house.He entered the house and said "Hey I got the box"and put the box down. They opened the box and saw that there was stones and one key but they didn't knew whose key is this. 

24 comments:

Dan* said...

y were stones there in the box :o

ne ways good !

Kumpal said...
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Attila said...

hmm.. so it seems they were betrayed.. but I might be wrong..

keep it going..

alex paul k said...

ohh gud going
nice post

alex paul k said...

nice template
i appreciate dis design

Shantharam Shenoy K said...

great work pal...god blog..good posts..keep the good work going....

sour said...

your ideas are good but work on your grammar skills :)

Hapi said...

Gain up to 600 visitors in a day for just one message here.

poonam said...

difficult for me to understand the continuing chapter.. but well.. nice overall.. the best blog around is the mad blog.?. hail vini.

Hakuna Matata said...

ha ahaa... i love reading the vini man chronicles....but hey shudnt u tweak the grammar a lil bit?

priyaa iyer said...

Nice

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

YOU WRITE WELL.. BUT TRY READING STUFF... IT WILL HELP IMRPOVE UR VOCAB AND GRAMMAR....

GOOD WORK..!!!!!

Misty Rhythm said...

hhmm...n yet again i believe ur 9!!! very neatly put...well written :)


p.s....errr...u put up this post past 2 am??? u shouldn't be staying up so, should u!

Misty Rhythm said...

n yes, i definitely 2nd hakuna n rinzi...u should read more, it'll open up ur mind :)

Varun said...

are you really this young? your writing is very good for your age

Abhinav Viswambharan said...

good one

Arjun... said...

very nice

Sana said...

i wonder wot da keye does. nice choice of names !1

Hakuna Matata said...

waiting waiting waiting for the next chapter :D

Tarun said...

Wow.....nice blog .....

Mith said...

hey vinayak....the hanman thing is in blogger itself...go to layout-> page elements->add gadgets->search hangman

Swarnadeep Chatterjee said...

nice one.

Anonymous said...

Good work.
Sarah, ky

kybluebird65 said...

So much talent for so young.