August 10, 2008

Vini Man and Vini Bond 3:chapter 4

So now the adventure begins because in this chapter the criminal are coming.Hope you will like this chapter.


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4.Plan of Six Criminals

Then Vane went to his house.
"Hey Vane have you got any mission?" asked Vini Bond's ghost
"When he asked this question there was a call on Vane's mobile.He picked up the mobile and he saw that Osborn was calling him.
"Hi" said Vane
"Hey Vane we got a mission but this time you have to get 6 criminals.You have to get all the 6 criminals.And listen there is one problem and it is they make plans together but they complete them alone" said Osborn
"What do you mean by they complete their plans alone?"asked Vane
"Oh you dumb.I mean that they make thier plans toghether but they complete it indivisually."said Osborn
"O.K Sir I will do that" replied Vane and putted the phone
Now I will take you to the Six Criminals.
At thier house Six Criminals were making a plan to rob a house.
Chain(Head of the Gang),Jackie,Arker,Vit,Grot and Jack.
This gang is known as Six Criminals.Now they were planning.
"Hey Vit first you will go to the house... but not like this, you will go to house by a cycle and you will be acting as a gardener.You will say to Mr.Orn(The man whose house Six Criminals want to rob) that you are a new gardener and now tell me where is the garden.That is what Vit you have to say in start."said Chain
"O.K" said Vit
"Then when Orn will tell you Vit that where the garden is you have to say him to come with you and tell you that what you have to do and when you will be busy in gardening Grot and I will take that box which have money and jewelleries.When we will come out of the house Jackie,Arker and Jack will come in a van and take us to the home.Then Vit you get the work over and come to the home.We will beceome millionares.

31 comments:

Attila said...

hmm.. burglary plan, will follow this ..

Benji said...

Looks like an interesting story. Will read it from the first.
I like your blog template - where did you get it from?

Sandi said...

Very refreshing to see a 9 year old blogging/writing a story.

Name : Mith said...

very interesting! wud luv to see how it ends?
r u really nine yrs old??

peter said...

hmm nice continuation !

Pranav said...

hmm nice continuation !

freakywiz said...

If you are really 9 yrs old.. then amazing.. keep goin brother.. you are great

www.lingouist.blogspot.com

Dan* said...

another nice post i read from a 9 year old :)

vanilla sky said...

i like the characters' names :)

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

its sooo god to see a 9 year old writing a story....

keep it up...

:)

Hannah Fanna said...

I got your comment. Nice blog you've got here.

Attila said...

hey.. change the topic for a while dude.. readers would soon get bored of it.

prashant said...

nice work by a 9 year old child...

i hope you will be also interesting in movies if yes then visit

www.prashant-currentaffairs.blogspot.com

Dan* said...

nice again ! by the way which class are u in ??

parth said...

good work

stuntman mike said...

great work boss....

when i was 9 i think i only wrote stupid "myself" essays

Sidrah said...

loved this chapter! keep writing, will be bck 4 more ..cya! ^_^

parth said...

waitin fr nxt chap

El Furibundo said...

unadultrated tripe! But I enjoyed it. Eager to know whether they pull it off!
-Furi

RINZU SUSAN RAJAN said...

u write well but y dont u imrpve the style by using less of ifs and buts... try to form complete sentences... the narative part is reallly good... one cant judge that its anine year olds blog...

Soumil said...

amazing to see such a young 'man' keeping ppl engrossed!

Misty Rhythm said...

as i've commented earlier...u definitely have talent. but don't get carried away...u still have a long way to go!! read more...that'll help u improve grammar and spellings :)

Misty Rhythm said...

as i've commented earlier...u definitely have talent. but don't get carried away...u still have a long way to go!! read more...that'll help u improve grammar and spellings :)

Arjun... said...

nice.....

Ilyas Kazi said...

Very nice collection of stories you have and its good to see you blogging....

Dan* said...

nice

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