May 20, 2010

Vini Man And Vini Bond returns

The two big characters of this blog,the ones for which I made this blog are returning with Vini Man and Vini Bond 4.If you have not read the last 3 parts of Vini Man and Vini Bond, here are the links:-
Vini Man and Vini Bond
Vini Man and Vini Bond 2
Vini Man and Vini Bond 3
The first chapter of Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 is going to be published in this post.So,here it is:-
VINI MAN AND VINI BOND 4
The Ghostly Adventures
Chapter 1
A Bad Start

Vane was walking on the road with Vini Man and Vini Bond’s ghosts. Vane saw a man with pistol. The man was going into a factory. Vane and the ghosts followed that man. When they reached in the factory they saw a gang of 5 people making fake money with some machines.
“Hey Vane, do you have pistol?” asked Vini Man’s ghost
“No, I don’t have, but why?”said Vane
“Because these all are criminals” said Vini Man’s ghost
“I will stop this. Just let me know where is the switch of fan” said Vane
“It’s there” said Vini Bond’s ghost pointing towards the switches
“OK, let me see” said Vane and walked towards the switches without making any noise and switched on the fan.
Then the currency notes started flying away. Then Vane kicked one man and punched another man but the other three men caught Vane but Vini Man’s ghost took them up so Vane was saved but afterwards the man who got a kick from Vane, that man got up and fired the pistol on Vane and Vane was injured. Then Vini Man and Vini Bond’s ghosts took Vane to hospital. The Vini Man’s ghost entered one man’s body and went to doctor and said ”Doctor, please do Vane’s operation.”
“OK,I will do that.Just bring 2 lac rupees”replied Doctor
“OK I will bring.Just do the operation”replied Vini Man’s ghost.
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The chapter ends,so how was the chapter?Well,its just started.This story has 8 chapters in total.

Keep visiting my blog for more of Vini Man and Vini Bond 4.




17 comments:

shaikna said...

yeah..........it is a nice story....to read......

Rushi said...

good one man keep it up !

vamsi said...

good story man..btw ur blog roxx..The free domain, blogs, etc.. all of them worked out well 4 u..ur a gr8 blogger dude.keep it up..:)

the black flame said...

Real nice stuff :)

g said...

Good characterisation :)

Continue!!!!

Keep it up!

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Muhammad Ahmed said...

ghost have guttzzz

Vij@ソ said...

very nice story dear....

insanevisitationsofacrazymind said...

nice story....nice charaterisation...

Dan* said...

looking forward to the next chapter...

switching the fan reminded me of megan from (Drake and Josh)

Tejas Lakhani said...

nice story, but bit lengthy..

MaC said...

Nice Story.... keep posting brother, :)

sumit verma said...

I wish to read Whole in one,work on Characters and there thinking process,may be you can write yourself..And very simple and obvious story this is..Write something you can not imagine,in a way that everybody can imagine.Just A suggestion..Best part is..keep writing, keep reading and visualizing ...you take care,God bless.

Abhilash Ruhela said...

boy, u have a big quality and an attraction to keep them attached to your blogs....Nobody can leave ur blogs without reading them again and again.. u have surprised every1.

Sachin said...

amazing , i like it..

Mohammed (Admin) said...

Good STORY!
Interesting dude
Continue!!!!

Keep it up!

RoHiT Iyer said...

Love your series.. You should get this copyrighted and should publish it..
Great work!! :)..Good luck.
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

Diana Lee said...

yeah..........it is a nice story....to read......