May 29, 2010

Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 Chapter 2

In the last post I posted the first chapter of Vini Man and Vini Bond 4.If you haven't read it here is the link:-
Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 Chapter 1
Here is the second chapter:-
Chapter 2
Vane's Operation



Then Vini Man’s ghost left the body of that man.
“Hey Vini Bond do we have 2 lakh rupees at our home?”asked Vini Man’s ghost to Vini Bond’s ghost
“I think so” said Vini Bond’s ghost
Then they went to their home and took the money but they got in a big trouble because they couldn’t find that man in which Vini Man’s ghost entered when they were taking Vane to hospital. They tried much hard to find that man and at last they got the man. Then Vini Man’s ghost entered his body and went to doctor and he gave the money to the doctor. All the 5 criminals entered the operation hall in which Vane was resting through a window. Their names were Alex,Jet,Frot(Brother of Grot(A criminal in VM and VB 3)),Cot and Prat.
“Hey Frot,kill Vane”said Alex
“He killed my brother now I will kill him” replied Frot and aimed the pistol at Vane but Vane heard their voices. He didn’t had much power but he kicked on Frot’s hand so the pistol went out through the window. Then Vane kicked Frot and then Frot got out through the window but he was lucky as there were two men down who were taking a man on a stretcher and Frot fell on that stretcher so he was saved. Then he ran from there but Vane thought that Frot was dead and he continued fighting and then he punched Alex and then kicked him and Alex got out through the window and he fell down and died. Then Vane got up from the stretcher. Then Prat took Vane near the window but Vane punched Prat and he took a pistol from Prat’s pocket and killed him. Then Vane aimed on Jet but Jet ran and jumped through the window and died. Then Vane picked up Cot and threw him out of the hospital through the window.





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15 comments:

g said...

Nice post!I had already read the first one!!!

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Muhammad Ahmed said...

waiting for the third chapter....vinayak!!

insanevisitationsofacrazymind said...

not bad....would do better to slow down the pace a bit.....describe the surroundings....and the characters a bit more.....that....afterall ....is the secret to a good short story...

pinxjinxed said...

Story is promising. keep it up.

Mohammed (Admin) said...

gud man..........waiting for the third part!

AbhiLaSH RuHeLa said...

hey bro nice story;..but u repeated some paragraphs again...

Anshul said...

Good one Vinayak... I read both the parts and waiting for the third one now... I think Frot will take revenge in that part.. Btw you repeated some paras towards the end.. And did I tell you that your blog template looks cool !! :)

RoHiT said...

Nice!! I find this series very enthralling :).. keep writing :D
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shaikna said...

hiiiiiiii nice......u rite more in all chapters....nw waiting fr 3rd chaptr.....

aditya said...

Great story boiii!! ;)

Vij@ソ said...

gr8 story boy......

sumi jayachandra said...

gud one vinayak!!!!
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sumi jayachandra said...

gud one vinayak!!!!
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littleWriter (Anunoy) said...

hmmm it is always good to begin than... whatever... kp goin bro...

Sachin said...

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