July 12, 2008

Vini Man and Vini Bond 3: Chapter 2

I think u have enjoyed the 1st chapter not very much but this is better than it.

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2.The Burning House.

At home Vane said to Vini Man's and Vini Bond's ghost that                                                          "Hey you two come down.You know I got a new boss.His name is Osborn"

When he said this there had been a bomb blast but not in Vane's house but in his neighbour's house.He came out of his house and saw that the whole house was burning.Then all the people of colony came out.                                                                                                                                             "Who burned this house and who kept bomb in it" thought Vane

Then Vane called a Fire Brigade.When the fire brigade cam Vane said to them                                  "Hey, please water this house"                                                                                                                    They started watering the house and after 30 minutes the fire was extinguished.Then Vane got into the house and he saw that there were 4 dead bodies and slowly-slowly the dead bodies were standing up.One dead body came near to Vane from his back.One came from his front and two came from the right and left direction.Vane was totally scared.At home Vini Man's and Vini Bond's ghosts were finding him.They went outside of the house and they saw that their neighbour's house was without fire and they got know that Vane will be in that house only.They went in that house and saw 4 dead bodies around Vane.                                                                         "Oh Vane you are here and we were finding you in the home" said Vini Man's ghost                         "Shut Up!!! Can't you see that 4 shosts are around me" replied Vane in fear                                       "O.K. we are coming to take you"said Vini Man's ghost and took Vane to his house.

31 comments:

prashant said...

gud work...keep it up

Ashutosh Didwania said...

Good one!

•sowmya• said...

and now the twist is ghosts...!

was waiting from a long time
found " water the house" too hilarious..!

Dina said...

nice one buddy.... its a series or sumthin???

Vinayak said...

@dina
it's a series.

alex paul k said...

good one
plz dun keep us waitin

Tarun said...

hmm gud one

Pranay said...

good work there kid...
awsome.. keep the series gin..

Gagan said...

interesting one !!

It is amazing to see such beautiful words from a 9 yrs old kid !

gr8 man !!

keep it up !!

keep posting ~~

\m/

Aravind said...

good one mate

Hakuna Matata said...

I like the vino bond ghost idea

Sandeep Balan said...

ha ha...hmmm..so the new one up haan..good job bro!

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Anonymous said...

You have a good story here but your writing skills needs a little push up. At downloadfreesongs.info I talk to my readers so that I grab their attention. Instead of using "Vane was totally scared" you can use "Vane was grasping for breath and trembling with fear" this grabs attention and makes story more interesting. My 2 cents.

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Gagan said...

interesting one !!

keep posting !!

The Solitary Writer. said...

good post man

Halla Bol!!! said...

keep it up buddy.. hope u make it big in the future,

well u've started early!!

ani said...

hehe its soo cool.. and nice..

continue to blog..
will come back for more..

peter said...

thts pretty gud !
cheers !!

Sid said...

nice blog, you have designed it very well.

parth said...

nice post....
series eh?


btw wats blog roll?

anurag said...

when is the next season coming??

Anish said...

couldn;t make much of it, then read through the first chapter to find out that it is pending :-D

Vini...Hmmm..

anyway, will get back to this one later..

vatsal said...

yeah ..whens next season commin?

Siddharth Bose said...

update ur blog man...

abymittal said...

i am getting hold of it now..well done . rock on!

Dan* said...

out of words......just keep it up !

Attila said...

hey.. slow down on commenting on orkut if you can't update the blog fast enough..

lage raho!!

Dan* said...

already commented in all your post so commenting again on this post

Bacha keep blogging !!

Dan* said...

good yaar