June 04, 2010

Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 Chapter 3

Hello everybody.As you know my Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 series is going on.In case you have missed the first two chapters of this story you can read it from here:-
Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 Chapter 1
Vini Man and Vini Bond 4 Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Oh Shit!!!

Vane was happy that all the 5 criminals are dead but then he got a call from Frot. He took the phone and answered the call “Hello”
“Hi,Vane” said Frot
“Hey, who are you?”asked Vane
“You will be shocked when I will tell you who am I” said Frot
“Tell me” shouted Vane
“OK, I am Frot” replied Frot
“What? You can’t be Frot. I killed him” shocked Vane
“No, you didn’t kill me. You just threw me out of the window” replied Frot
“Oh Shit” said Vane to himself
“As I am a good thief I am telling you that I am going to Sydney tonight. Catch me if you can” said Frot and cut the call.
Then Vane ran from there but when he went out of the operation hall all the doctors and nurses tried to stop him because he was not fine but Vane pushed them all and ran from the hospital. Vini Man and Vini Bond’s ghosts saw him so they followed him. Then they asked to Vane “What happened?”
“Frot is going to Sydney. I have to stop him” answered Vane
“We will take you to airport swiftly” said Vini Man’s ghost. Then Vini Bond and Vini Man’s ghost took Vane and flew to the airport. Then Vane saw Frot into the plane and he ran swiftly towards the plane but the plane took off and Vane said “Oh Shit”
Then Vane went to his house and took some money.
“Why are you taking the money?”asked Vini Man’s ghost to Vane
“Now I have to go to Sydney” said Vane
“OK, let’s see some news” said Vini Bond’s ghost
Then Vane switched on the television and kept a news channel. The news was “The plane going to Sydney was crashed. Only one man left alive. He is in Mumbai Hospital”.
“Oh, I think that man would be Frot” said Vane
“So now I will go to Mumbai” said Vane
“OK, let’s go” said Vini Man’s ghost
“No, I will go alone” said Vane
“OK” said Vini Bond’s ghost
”Then Vane went to airport and got into the airplane. Then Vane reached Mumbai and called a taxi and went to Mumbai hospital. Then Vane went to the enquiry counter and asked for Frot.
“Frot was admitted here yesterday but he ran from here” said the man who was standing at the enquiry counter.
Then Vane got a call. He picked up his phone and said” Hello, who are you?”
“Hi Vane who do you think who am I?”replied the caller
“Oh Frot” said Vane
“Yeah, guessed right” said Frot
“Now, today I will go to Sydney. Catch me if you can” said Frot and cut the phone
“Huh now what will happen in Sydney” Vane said to himself
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8 comments:

Writing Buddha said...

Nice...THis is the best chapter till now and its my pleasure to comment on it very first...Keep going my cuty bro...Hope u go this way till very far..

VeeKay said...

hey thats so nice boy...I am waiting for the sequel..:) Keep blogging vinayak :)

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Unknown said...

hey vini u have written a very good story....


keep blogging!

Abhijit Bhattacharyya said...

i would recommend you to put more stress on characters,locales nd surroundings.....that would help the story a lot....

shaikna said...

hiiiiiiii really vry nice.....hw frot is escapd becoz all 5 fellows dead alrdy........vry surprised.....

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